Hello, Jean! Though I know that you tried to form this as a poem, I just had a hard time understanding what is the overall though of your post. I just find it too short and the information were not organized. Making a poem is quite a challenging thing, that's why it is considered as one of the hardest pieces to make. It takes emotion combined with creativity to be able to make a great poem. But there is always a room for improvement, and I am hoping you'll improve your skills more!
John The Baptist
Pax Et Bonum